We got an assignment where we had to rework someone else's art. This is more of a change than an improvement. Unfortunately, this isn't the picture I had origianally intended on doing, so I put off the assignment for awhile and chose this one as a good back up (it seemed recent and was of the character she liked at the time). I'm really sorry to have rushed this one so much.

this is the picture [link]

Anyways, the things that the class said that I should improve (since I removed to notes to self layer), were that I should put in more of the green that was in the original in the trees, warm up the yellow of the shirt (more like the original), more brown and moss for the tree, and hide her right hand more in shadow.

So, thank you for letting me work on your work, you have great things in your art making it quite fun to work on.